I completely gutted Act I…

 

…and plan on filling it back up tonight!

Update 10/27/2007: I’m starting to realize something about this particular Rite of Passage story, where the main character, Johnny, has flaws that will be corrected by the end. I’m finding that I need to exploit these flaws for fun purposes during the Fun & Games section of the story, and them have them come out in increasingly creepy, off-putting ways towards the end of Act II, right before the act of surrendering to these flaws. Finding the best, and most fun/creepy ways, to exploit these flaws is my next challenge.

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